*Working poem-piece – eventual Cork City poem-piece tidbits / vociferous; entertainment; apoplectic – define nature of use in set sentence; fraught with – angst-laden summaries/summer day’s remotely instilled with = uncontrolled substance aside angry, angry, juvenile eyes ..

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Socially/Remotely speaking((.)) S/he never really amounted to (matter of fact) much (no-more/anymore) – except (,only ever of course,) for ((mightily)) managing to ((mightily/magnificently)) muster (this) secretive sensation from someplace/where(?) significantly surreal and undeniably hard-sought/both -fraught with inhumane levels of unapologetic entertainment/humanity

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Forever: (And) S/he shall/can (in fact) hold his/her smoldering tongue (and)/(,) all a-whilst these other decidedly bespoke albeit ((no-less)) ((utterly)) (and) (remotely controlled) remote people.. … will/shall/can ((in fact)) start to ((vociferously) unravel –

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Hand-in-hand and standing desirably/both detrimentally back together again. Makeshift Zen. (elaborate if necessary with other poem-piece.. )

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For ever(,) and it carries with it a face filled with happy/tears.. boisterously buoyed ((boisterously)) back together again amidst/midst the loud-mouthed, juvenile/linguistic semisonics… (that/which have been) heavily inundated/similarly saturated…

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with(-in an (audited/audible) auditorium (preciously) instilled with) (impressionable) jeers.

Take 2 = “A JigSaw Mansion Living Inside Of His Majestic Mind – Mixed To Match, Matter Of Fact”

Socially speaking, he never really amounted to (matter of fact) much (anymore) – except (only ever of course) for ((mightily)) managing to ((mightily)) muster secretive sensation from someplace significantly surreal and undeniably hard-sought/both -fraught

Forever: He shall/can (in fact) hold his smoldering tongue, (and) all a-whilst these other decidedly bespoke albeit no-less ((utterly)) (and) (remotely controlled) remote people.. … will start to majestically unravel –

Hand-in-hand and standing desirably/both detrimentally back together again. Makeshift Zen.
For ever, and it carries with it a face filled with happy/tears.. boisterously buoyed back together amidst/midst the loud-mouthed, juvenile semi-sonics… (that/which have been) heavily inundated/similarly saturated with impressionable jeers.

IS THIS REALLY HIS/HER STILTED STREET FILLED WITH INJURED NEEDLES?

Take 3 – “A Jig-Saw Mansion Living Up Inside Of His/Her (Majestic) Mind – Mixed To Match, Matter(-)Of(-)Fact” / ‘Unpardonable Paralysis’

*Working poem-piece – eventual Cork City poem-piece tidbits / vociferous; entertainment; apoplectic – define nature of use in set sentence; fraught with – angst-laden summaries/summer day’s remotely instilled with = uncontrolled substance aside angry, angry, juvenile eyes ..
1Socially/Remotely speaking((.)) S/he never really amounted to (matter of fact) much (no-more/anymore) – except (,only ever of course,) for ((mightily)) managing to ((mightily/magnificently)) muster (this) secretive sensation from someplace/where(?) significantly surreal and undeniably hard-sought/both -fraught with inhumane levels of unapologetic entertainment/humanity
2Forever: (And) S/he shall/can (in fact) hold his/her smoldering tongue (and)/(,) all a-whilst these other decidedly bespoke albeit ((no-less)) ((utterly)) (and) (remotely controlled) remote people.. … will/shall/can ((in fact)) start to ((vociferously) unravel –
3Hand-in-hand and standing desirably/both detrimentally back together again. Makeshift Zen. (elaborate if necessary with other poem-piece.. )
4For ever(,) and it carries with it a face filled with happy/tears.. boisterously buoyed ((boisterously)) back together again amidst/midst the loud-mouthed, juvenile/linguistic semisonics… (that/which have been) heavily inundated/similarly saturated…
5with(-in an (audited/audible) auditorium (preciously) instilled with) (impressionable) jeers.
IS THIS REALLY HIS/HER STILTED STREET FILLED WITH INJURED NEEDLES? Or a both heartbreaking and heartfelt way to believe in (some kind/sort of) (astute) beauty again…