Maybe you’re talking about the detail in the seen to be derogatory, really. You’re trying to… breathe some strange life into a peculiar sort of quick-thinking type of writing. I don’t like the word poetry one bit, though. Mainly because it just puts any kind of writer into one tiny, clapped-out, old and aged box of opinions as to what constitutes poetry. Mine isn’t poetry at all, so anyone who says it doesn’t have the constitutions for poetry is absolutely on the money. It could not be further from being poetry, in my eyes. And, really, those are the only eyes that count on this score going forward 🤷‍♂️