They asked what his OCD felt like and he gave them his every worrisome woe – his words… his everything sentimental. Yet, it will never (ever) again send him (—) mental. (When) The/se eyes arise brought back to life –Always fighting only never, ever smiling
(And) All awhile, they (will) furiously stare in the face of perfectly placed prestige as (a) prioritized part of the (entire) parcel-wrapped process.
Yes! He just must (magnify and) manage at causing all (array of) (want-away) words to (magnificently/(-)) amount, to take demonstrative/earned account.
Yes, indeed, this peculiar aside/and decidedly brave nature (of instrumental his) will never (ever) get to (wholly/(completely)) second-guess/ing nor fully/completely comprehend/ing the telling of its own (such) (inhumane) (and) debilitating tale; perhaps not/never (ever) again, only (n)ever until.. … …
It (begins) (to) own/s its own industry(,) and this “wonderful war” with (wrestling/(wrought-iron)) words becomes the fun-damental/no.1/number-one ultimatum that/which shall/can/will take him (soothingly)/(deservedly) above
From belief and below(,)Shall rise a/the fastidious soul.

Take 2 – “That Look Of Utterly Belonging To This World”

They asked what his OCD felt like and he gave them his every worrisome woe – his words… his everything sentimental. Yet, it will never (ever) again send him (—) mental. (When) The/se (–) eyes arise(,)Brought back to life –Always fighting only never(, ever) smiling
(And) All awhile, they (will/shall) furiously stare in the face of perfectly placed prestige as (a) (wonderfully) prioritized part of the (entire/ly) parcel-wrapped process.
Yes! He just must (magnify and) (miraculously) manage at causing all (array of) (want-away) words to (magnificently/(-)) amount, to take (both) demonstrative/earned / (demonstrative and earned) account.
Yes, indeed!! This (both) peculiar aside/and decidedly brave nature (of instrumental his) will never (ever) get to (wholly)/(completely) second-guess/ing nor fully/completely comprehend/ing the (treacherous) telling of (its)=? own/one (such) (inhumane) (and) debilitating tale; perhaps not/never (ever) again, only (n)ever until.. … …
It (begins) (to) own/s its own industry(,) and this “wonderful war” with (wrestling/(wrought-iron)) words becomes/became the fun-damental/no.1/number-one ultimatum that/which shall/can/will vigorously/instrumentally take him (oh, so) (very (soothingly)/(deservedly) above
From belief and below(,)Shall rise a/the fastidious soul.