Her eyes say it, her mind says it, it all says pretty much everything (really) brand new and beautifully improved(, really).
Improvised, rather.

(See,) She’s been to see an (——)/intelligible amount of (—-) things and it… (Seriously) FEELS

As though these words of hers/warm blood (really) NEED to (have been) be: creatively capitalised

Til we become comfortably ParalYsed, “Oh, my…” – by her (heavenly/(-)) sense of (heavenly/(-)) portrayal”

– (Again) and ALL other (sidewinding) things which WILL… entice, k-i-n-d-l-y — [his] eager/ly eyes “Back to Life”/

(See,) She stirred something (Seriously suggestive) within his (Bankrupt/bare knuckle soul when it was about to (—-) explode,
and THAT is (—-) called –

A DaNcInG LaDy whose (meticulous) mind matches her (hellishly SuGgEsTiVe) heart for freak show Art

And here he shall stART